Second mid crit

Another mid crit, except this time it was like a competition judged mainly by the studio with Professor Thurlow as the moderator. My project has evolved a lot in the week since the last crit, but as always there are issues to work out. The form has been refined, but the concept is largely unchanged. The main criticism I received was something that I hear a lot. What I was trying to do and what my words and diagrams described were something much more than what my drawings and models show. The concept was illustrated a little bit better in my drawings, but the graphic representation still has a ways to go.